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Sunday, October 24, 2004 ' 1:32 AM Y

& your soul is all i ever wanted
Corrections!!

well. FINALLY someone has very kindly pointed out my mistakes in my essay! So these are the comments I have received from Jian Wei, please read everyone and take note!

1) Paragraph 2, line 1, penyakit should be changed to penyakit-penyakit
because after the word seperti, I used a few examples or plural.

2) Paragraph 3, line 2
I had NO idea that the word SIMPTOM does not exist in the Kamus Dewan! I am so doomed. PLEASE TAKE NOTE EVERYONE!

3) Paragraph 3, line 5
It sounds like an ayat tergantung. Will confirm as soon as possible.

4) Paragraph 4, line 1
berleluasa seems to be used inappropriately. Again, I will confirm.

5)Last paragraph, 2nd last line
could be ayat tergantung. Will check and confirm.

Christine

Cest MoiY

Xtine
Loves
Music

'I dreamt that I was composing a symphony....I had gone to my table to begin writing it down when I suddenly reflected: "If I write this part I shall let myself be carried on to write the rest. The natural tendency of my mind to expand the material is sure to make it very long...When the symphony is finished I shall be weak enough to allow my copyist to copy it out, and thus immediately incur a debt of 1,000 or 1,200 francs. Once the parts are copied I shall be harassed by the temptation to have the work performed; I shall give a concert in which, as is sure to be the case in these days, the receipts will barely cover half the expenses; I shall lose what I have not got; I shall want the necessaries of life for my poor invalid, and shall have no money for either myself or for my son's keep on board ship!"...I threw down my pen saying, "Bah! I shall have forgotten the symphony tomorrow." But the following night the obstinate symphony again presented itself...'
- Berlioz writing about a nightmare he had during the 1850s

SHE WANTSY

job >3
grand piano <3
happiness

SCREAM;TALKY

(where to get one)

EXITSY

CREDITSY

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